Rough Cut Feedback

Our last audience research, we showed a rough cut of our music video this was our feedback;

• Eye shot, 2 eyes rather than just the one
• Take all shots of zoe looking at the camera out unless a shot of loui is after
• Need a lot more performance shot
• Feet shots - else where, establishing shot
• Cafe Establishing shot
• Cutting more, shots are too long
• Key Frame, create movement
• More location aka tonbridge park
• Need Stronger First shot of Bruno
• Singing needs to be full on and clear
• Construction of a heart by Bruno
• More Close ups
• Rule of thirds

Overall our rough cut went well and now we need to carry on with editing with these improvements in mind.